Sunday, November 7, 2010

Research Paper First Draft - finished

Radhames Guzman

Magdalena Bogacka

English 101

11/8/2010

Advertisements, articles, and other media are displayed almost everywhere we go and everywhere we look. The purpose of media is to convince us to buy the goods, products and/or services they're advertising. The media are designed in such a way that when we think about it, it’s much more than what they want us to see. The media use hidden messages behind their products more specifically referring to men and the type of masculinity they promote. The manliness masculinity is one type that is being focused within these specific media. Esquire magazine is a men’s magazine which focuses, or better yet emphasizes men’s fashion. However, fashion is not everything that is being articulated. The messages in articles and advertisements show hints to what the magazine is really offering to people reading it.

Throughout the year of 2009-2010, Esquire magazine demonstrated a pattern which the articles and advertisements showed types of masculinity and how they were trying to promote it to the society. The manliness masculinity is one type that was viewed to be present. This reflects toward hegemonic similarities which promotes power, authority, and aggression. Some supporting points on the aspect of manliness masculinity provided evidence from articles within the magazine including what things a man should own, how it represents knowledge and skill, the evolution of man and how he’s come to be defined in the present, and what people view as manliness through specific careers/jobs. Some other points which are very effective in providing evidence on how the magazine promotes the manliness aspect of masculinity includes articles which show how men should be athletic or be built to show the “macho” in them, how men react toward women and specific rules into proving their manliness to attract them.

According to the manliness stereotype aspect of masculinity, men are supposed to be people who lead their family. They are the ones who are in control. Men are also known to be born with specific knowledge and skill by gender. According to an article in Esquire magazine, it states that “A man using a GPS is half a man” (“Things a Man should own” 80-83). What this means is for example, if a man is using a map or a cordless drill, it signifies how men could utilize certain items to get somewhere or fix something within the home to show manliness. Most men have the natural born ability to have the urge to fix things. The manliness in being a handyman is displayed through the ability to fix problems and seen in the man who is knowledgeable of his surroundings therefore giving him a sense of direction in other aspects of his life.

In accordance with another article in Esquire magazine, it quotes “With a strong and flexible core, you can throw harder, hit harder in swing sports, and perform better in demanding sow sports (Curtis Pesmen)”. Working out the body’s anchor makes the body strong and flexible. Some women when looking for men in their lives search for specific features including physical appearance. Statistics show women are attracted to men who are fit. Curtis explains how having a better body makes you a better man. It’s important for men who want to attract women to work out and develop those certain things which are muscles, fitness, or self-perseverance to create the look of being manly to attract women. The appearances could be going to the gym, working out to get nice big muscles, or just to prove to others you are fit enough to be in a gym. This shows that the man is strong, has endurance in specific activities, and handles himself independently. This conveys masculinity because women would look at this in a way where as the man is strong and he could handle his own. Along with that, he could also handle his women in a way that’s attractive towards them.

A quote from an article says, “When you happen upon a beautiful woman, you are that monk (“A Man’s Guide to Women” 104-111)”. It is to believe that to win a woman’s heart you must know her heart. According to “A Man’s Guide to Women”, men are required to have a specific guide to women in order to have a decent relationship. You are to learn how to understand women by knowing what makes them feel more comfortable around you. Women see men as gentlemen who are sometimes concerned to the feelings and emotions of a woman. Women also feel it’s important to show affection through the love of buying gifts and occasional outings. Knowing these key points puts a label on a man’s head that screams out “this is the man I want!” This promotes the manliness aspect of masculinity because men need to prove themselves as a man to act a certain way or show them affection. This of course shows responsibility which will give the opportunity for men to, hence the term, “go wild”, once women see the actions men are doing.

Manliness sometimes tends to describe hegemonic masculinity. A secondary source stated, “male power is at a structural level with no real understanding of how power is organized in terms of complicity…”(Tony Coles). “Masculinity does not mean the same thing to all men” (Tony Coles). Men that possess positions of power and wealth are described to be people who are manly. For example, they are responsible, they know what they want, and they have goals; all of which applies to men who are in control and men who are dominant. Some examples which apply to hegemonic masculinity focus on men who are “slender, fit, young, aggressive, and businessman dressed”.

Many people believe that men are who they are because of tradition. The evolution of the man has changed over the past decades, it refers to how society views it and how man is defined but things stay the same. In another article, we could analyze that to truly look at the manliness of masculinity; we would need to focus where man originated from (Tom Chiarella 61-63). The foundation of manliness can be based on the ideals that stem from the traditional man and certain qualities a man owns. For example, back in the day, there were no clocks. Certain developments such as telling the time of day was a man’s way to be in control of knowing his surroundings. Looking up at the sun, along with knowing which way is north and where the fish run made man one with the environment, thus adding to the control. Through the centuries, these ideas have been added on or altered to the perspective of man. The ideas point out the manliness masculinity coming from the very beginning of man.

Along with the evolution of man, there are reasons to believe as well that men who are manly become formed as early as young men in school. Macho mannerisms are displayed in order to conform within the school social setting. For example, “macho” students are perceived to run the show and define what is cool and uncool. Loud and rough, they make themselves the center of attention. In another secondary source article, it quotes “The concept “student styles” is inspired by the students’ own discourse” (Selma Therese Lyng 466). A multiple set of student styles is presented, including the macho man. Students have shared what performances, preferences, and other signifiers fit well together within one style and being able to display through practice, the knowledge of these rules which is essential to being rendered as a socially competent and intelligible person. The macho mannerisms promote the manliness masculinity and ultimately, the macho developments will carry out with young men past their pubescence and into their adult manhood.

Based on these reviewed articles, Esquire magazine portrays subliminal messages of the manliness aspect of masculinity. To attract readers and devoted subscribers, the "man's man" was definitely the way to go. In this way, they could reach out to a broader audience which focuses on men but can also include women. Their articles imply that real men own tools to represent knowledge and skill, take into account for staying fit, learn the ways to understand women, and are born with the foundation of manliness the come from the traditional man. In a manly man's world, esquire magazine has it all figured out to promote their views and reach its target audience.

Works Cited

“Things A Man Should Own.” Esquire, Vol. 151, Issue 5 May (2009) 80-83. Print.

Chiarella, Tom “What Is A Man?” Esquire, Vol. 151, Issue 5 May (2009) 61-63. Print.

Pesmen, Curtis “Better Body, Better Man…” Esquire, Vol. 151, Issue 5 May (2009) 100-107.

Print.

“A Man’s Guide To Women.” Esquire, Vol. 153, Issue 5 May (2010) 104-111. Print

Coles, Tony “Negotiating the Field of Masculinity: The Production and Reproduction of

Multiple Dominant Masculinities” Men and Masculinities, Vol. 12 Number 1 October

(2009) 30-44. Print

Lyng, Selma Therese “Is there more to “Antischoolishness” than Masculinity? On Multiple

Student Styles, Gender, and Educational Self-Exclusion in Secondary School” Men and

Masculinities, Vol. 11, Number 4 June (2009) 462-487. Print.

3 comments:

  1. This is a good pre-first draft. I really like the ideas in your body paragraphs regarding the different aspects of manly masculinity. I've written more detailed comments into a Microsoft Word version of your paper, which I've e-mailed to you. Let me know if you have any further questions.

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  2. I emailed you my comments and points for the update first draft.

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  3. Incase you can't read my handwriting.

    A) It engages the reader fine, and it informs us that the entire paper should be about the medias relationship with manliness masculinity. The introduction looks fine.

    B) Yes, it's not very clear though, sounds like the focus of the introduction is the media instead of the masculinity it exhibits. I'm guessing he could maybe add the thesis sentence earlier in the introduction.

    C) Yes, the body paragraphs begin with perfect topic sentences in my opinions.

    D) Yes, the topic sentences are supported well by the analysis you give in your body paragraphs.

    E) Yes, it's easily understandable, and organized well.

    F) While I know there has to be a mistake somewhere, I can't find any.

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