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Friday, October 1, 2010

Radhames Guzman
English 101.0800
Miss B
October 1, 2010

Essay 1
Advertisement Analysis


Advertisements are displayed almost everywhere we go and everywhere we look. The purpose of these advertisements is to convince us to either buy the goods, products and/or services their advertising. The ads are designed in such a way that when you think about it, it’s much more than what they want you to see. Most of the time ads have a hidden message behind their product and we’re going to focus on a specific ad to show what it says about men and the type of masculinity they promote. In an ad posted by, Macy’s for Beckham Signature Story “Him and Her” fragrance shows three supporting points promoting masculinity which are physical appearances from the man and woman, the reaction of the woman towards the man, and the man’s reaction towards the woman.

The ad is very interesting due to the fact that what it’s promoting is a “His and Her” fragrance but shows a lot of masculinity. The physical appearance of the man shows strength, power, and lust. The man is wearing a blazer with a white collared shirt, opened, and no tie. As well with the man have a clean cut with light facial hair. The attraction of this promotes masculinity. The fragrance adds to his attraction and his physical appearance backs him up on it. The blazer with the white collared shirt shows he is a man with class and he knows what he’s doing in a situation dealing with women. The clean cut with light facial hair shows his hygiene. It makes him look older but young at the same time. Men who are fully bearded are generally perceived to be more masculine in appearance. The fact that he had some, suggested the masculinity but since it was not full, the man still had a sense of youth and makes him attractive to the woman which is a plus because it further enhances his manliness.

Another good aspect in this ad that shows masculinity is the way the woman is reacting toward the man. The woman’s face is expressed in a way where she’s having some sort of sexual dream. With her eyes closed, and her lips being puckered. It seems she’s in complete thought with the man. The ad suggests that woman play a role in determining what is attractive as it pertains to masculinity. It shows the woman as she reacts to the man’s attraction factors, which include looks and smell. The man having the factors with physical appearance and now with the sense of smell attracts the woman more to him almost if it was an equation of 1+1=2. In other words, having this enhancement makes it feel integrated which brings to the next point of being in control.

The last aspect we’re going to get into is how the man in the ad is holding the woman in it. Both the man and woman appear to be standing and leaning against the wall. The woman’s posture seems to be reacting toward the man holding her waist and pulling her close to him. The man has a slight lean toward the woman as if is going to kiss her but with a firm look upon his face. This shows dominance, control, and power from within. The fact that he’s looking at her and only her instead of looking at the camera shows the faithfulness, authority, and supremacy from his personality. He’s not saying “Look at me, you know you want this”, at other people. Better yet, “She’s mine, and because I’m wearing this fragrance it’s enhancing my factors.”

While taking into consideration of the supporting points in the ad which are physical appearances from the man and woman, the reaction of the woman towards the man, and the man’s reaction towards the woman, it makes it an important aspect for men and how it promotes their masculinity.

4 comments:

  1. I think your essay does address the task

    i think your introduction was very good and very affective. I think your ad goes greatly with your three points. I believe all three of your body paragraphs focus on one idea(stood on topic). I do believe you made very good transition throught the three paragraphs. I think you can add more to your conclusion and fix a couple of grammer mistakes.

    I think your introduction was the most succesful paragraph because it had a engaging first sentence and you explained your article and told us what your three points were in a a very engaging way.

    I would just proof read this once more but i think your paper is very well written

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  2. In few words,I really believe your essay is connected to the task because your intruduccion, body paragraphs and conclusion refer the masculinity and advertising. Furthermore, the thesis statement contain the tree main points about he task.
    Your advertising about the fragance for Beckam called "Him and Her" is very exiting because the main idea in each paragraph showing interesting aspects about the masculinity.
    I think your first draft is well organized, however your conclusion must to be stronger.

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  3. We already spoke about your introduction in class; try to develop it in such a way that it reflects your analysis and also include a thesis which states WHAT type of masculinity the Beckham fragrance is selling/promoting. Also try to avoid announcements such as “we are going to focus on…” In the first body paragraph you conduct an effective analysis of the male model’s appearance (grooming and clothing), but you mention that his look is one of ‘strength, power and lust” yet you do not comment on all of these? It will probably be quite difficult to cover all three in one body paragraph? Also, I’m not sure what you mean by “As well with the man have a clean cut and light facial hair”? The following paragraph presents a great analysis of how the man’s masculinity, which is enhanced by the scent, as you rightly point out, makes the woman attracted to the man. But read over this paragraph carefully as some to the sentences could be more clearly expressed and their word choice could be made effective. For example, “With her eyes closed and her lips being puckered” is a fragment or an incomplete thought. Also, “she’s in complete thought with the man”? Do you mean she is under his spell or she is mesmerized by the man? The final body paragraph focuses on the chemistry between the man and the woman, which is enhanced, as you point out, by the Beckham scent. Once again, avoid the didactic “we’re going to get into…” Since you bring up the man’s power and control here, you should probably remove it from the first body paragraph? The conclusion needs work as it just repeats the last sentence of your introduction. Consult The Little Penguin Handbook for suggestions regarding concluding paragraphs.

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  4. I like your introduction.
    I think your introduction capture the reader's interest because it seems staged deployment.
    But I think your conclusion is not persuasive enough.

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